8th Graders share their 6-word poetry memoirs after completing a unit on poetic devices and poetry analysis.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Period 1 Poems
Post 3 of your poems as comments under your class period. Make sure to give yourself credit by, at the least, signing your poem with your first name or initials.
55 comments:
1. Christmas day; a horse outside, SCREAM!!!
2. Fairy ride hospital, waiting there- born.
3. car ride: Florida, Disney, chill out.
--val s
Florida makes me sick to stomach.
When I'm sick there are problems.
Grandfather died in house fire 2005
conner
like to play HATE to work
best days of school first & last
I bring dogs outside clean. Dogs play with you, lick you. Too many dogs too many messes.
1. Hollywood is a very exciting place.
2. Disney Land: buzzy, popular, excting place.
3. High school: crazy, loud, unexpected place.
4. I am indpendent, nice, caring, sweet.
--Jenna
travis i really like how you talked about one thing
Val i liked how you talked about Florida it is so nice there
Travis, i really liked all ur poems!
1.Partys are nothing without party starters.
2.You're as big as you feel.
3.Camping is better with people.
Generations I come to harvest it.
I saw ,herd ,and spoke it.
Nature is always what I need.
D.R.
1. I'm bored now because wrist broke.
2. Went to Boston: Yankees beat Redsox.
3. Last Christmas: a new Xbox 360.
--AJC
Jenna, good job
shane you are write the only cool part of school is the first&last days of school
corner I like how you talk about florida sorry about your grandfather. by:travis
jenna,
I like how you discribed Disney world and it almost felt the same for me but in Florida.
alex,
I like how you said your as big as you feel.
val I like you talk about christmas and about spain ankle. by:travis
val what are you talking about but i like it
1. NYC: where dreams can come true.
2. High school was scary...at first.
3. American Idiot: which path to choose?
-- Jamel
alex what a peom bout it could be worked on
shane I like how you talk about school and you hate it because I hate it too. by:travis
conner nice job on your poems they were good
travis,
I like how you talked about your dogs.
devin, one suggestion i have is make a new poem for #2 cuz i do not get it!!!!!!!!!!
shayne i like your poems you are right about the first an last days being the best
alex I like how you talk about partys and I like partys and I am a party starter.
shane one suggestion I have is be more clear
shayne am with u i have to work
jamel,
I love your poams
deven you make your self sound like dave crocket
Good job Val,I really lked how you capitalized scream it makes the story better.
jenna your so free sperited
Reading was hard now it's easy My first light it was awesome My first word I said daddy Jon.S
jamel said jenna hollywood sounds exspensive but it most be fun.
cool poems travis.
alex I like your poems.
Val, I liked how you went to florida it's warm there.-Jon
Travis, I love poems they are fun to right.-jon
Jenna, Hollywood is a wonderful place to be ,but everything there is alot of money.-jon
jenna i like ur poem about High school: crazy, loud, unexpected place. i like it bcuz it is wat i think
Devan i liked you poem "I saw ,herd ,and spoke it" Beacuse its so true we all do it.
i love poetry it is fun
1. Hard working for everything in life.
2. Not everything in life is bad.
3. Friends and family are the best.
1. Life is twisty and turney, compicated
2. Life is very very very messy.
3. Life takes narrow and sharp curves.
1. We are always very annoyingly difficult.
2.Life is too short. Just play.
3.Way to many clothes in my closet.
:)A.G.
Everything is my life, friends, family
flying, landing, spending time with family
from hard work to relax time
1. i have no life, at all.
2. snowboarding, in the winter, cant wait.
3. summer's well over, thats too bad.
bailey,F
jenna,
i like how u told in ur poen about hollywood im gunna live there when in older hahah well i want to good job on ur poems!
1. football,fourwheeling,hunting are very fun.
2. football is the best sport ever.
3.redskins will always beat the giants.
bailey f,
i like how u said u have no life and idk if u do but it seems like it but anyway goo job on ur poems
1.feelings hide inside a black hole
2.life spins in many different directions
3.seizing the moment for lies,cries
1.i dislike poetry it is evil
1. i love poetry, it is cool!!
2. christmas day, screaming, very very fun!!
3. burlington hospital, waiting to be born.
justin P
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